i’m thinking this is a monologue. you can read it as such. or poetry if you prefer. i’m thinking it’s a part of a larger whole. at some point i’ll put in a guide to how i use punctuation in plays. though maybe it’s fairly intuitive. the key thing is to hear it.
this is what she says
she says
this is the beginning of a story
like a sweeping epic film
like a horse
no a cheetah running slow motion
like a wolf about to pounce
like a bear standing in a stream waiting to catch salmon
with its claws
with its claws
eyes locked
eyes set forward
unblinking
in full comprehension of the scene
eyes set
running
forward
quick jolt to the outside
lean
and then closer than ever
closing in
closing in
and one slight leap
a pounce forward onto prey
onto
and latching on
latched on
holding
holding on
this is the beginning of a story she says
she says
i want to imagine yourself as a bird
as a dove
as an eagle
i want you to imagine yourself flying
see yourself in open blue
in open space
floor of green
i want you to see yourself
dream guide
i am the guide
i am the dream guide
this is your journey
i can make you real
do you want to be real?
give me your hand